Saturday, March 8, 2014

Rain Comments

Rating: 3.9

I hate the rain
And it's raining today
I want it to stop
So I can go out and play.
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Kevin Quero
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 January 2016

I just hate when it rains I want it to go away I can't take it anymore So please rain don't stay. Very simple words and conveying a lot... thank u dear poet. tony

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Walterrean Salley 11 September 2014

A very good poet for your age. Good things ahead. You've painted a clear picture. Keep writing good poems. Thanks.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 10 March 2014

Nice complimentary poem to the children's song Rain rain Go away Come again Some other day.

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Suman Kumar Das 08 March 2014

Nice start.........................liked it..................i inviteyou to check out mine. Thanks

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