Monday, January 20, 2014

Rain Comments

Rating: 4.5

They say water can wash away pain
But today we find no comfort in the rain
Standing out in the summer storm
While inside we feel so torn
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Star Crossed Lady
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Poetheart Morgan 21 January 2014

Oh! No, rain has not that power...wash away the pain? ? ? ? Just you can do that....just we can do that..... and life goes on... repeating itself for all of us....

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Khairul Ahsan 20 January 2014

Some pains and scars are not washable, but nature soothes. It's a nice poem, rated it 9/10.

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