Thursday, May 25, 2006

Rain Comments

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Alleviating, almost a mist,
Vertical, perfect,
Smashing crystals on the,
Rugged floor.
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Christopher Jackson
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Brian Dorn 27 October 2006

Excellent write, Christopher... interesting use of words and a great ending line! Brian

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Anjana Aravind 03 July 2006

Chris, You have the makings of a great poet.You have a way with words which I like. But if sweet downpour Can cause such pain, Let it rain on me forever. What a wonderful verse. I like it. Anjana

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