Monday, May 13, 2013

Rain Comments

Rating: 3.5

All night rain kept beating
against roofs and windows
Mad with unfullfilled desires
Pouring out her being
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Insha Muzafar
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B.u Afnan 02 January 2017

pouring out her being...into gutters... this line is so simple, yet powerful! ... well done

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Khairul Ahsan 28 March 2014

This is a nice poem on rain, well described. 'till indifference of world exhausted her schiziod energy' - is the line I liked most.

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