Tuesday, July 10, 2012
Rain! ! ^_^ ¡¡ Comments
Rating: ★2.5
It was cold and quiet so windy,
Dim and dark with no sun around,
Black heavy clouds surrounding my head,
With ice chilling breeze freaking me out!
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9/10/2025 9:30:00 AM # 1.0.0
Though it is written beautifully, it lacks the flow of a poem. I like the way you describe rain but when spoken it seems the flow is missing. =D