Saturday, March 17, 2012

Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sweet smell of rain
Decends like a falling dove,
Leaning into it I feel
A soulful plea...
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Smoky Hoss
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Adeline Foster 17 January 2013

You will find that I too have written one called - Rain - but from a different point of view. Adeline

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Eric Cockrell 20 March 2012

rain, the tears of God, falling on our faces! great poem.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 20 March 2012

Wonderful poem with a lot of insights, and rain as purifier is always the excellent image. Rain is always refreshing.

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Wahab Abdul 19 March 2012

C J RIGHTLY SAID, THE RAIN IS THE METAPHOR, OTHERWISE HOW DOES THE RAIN WASH WAY ALL THE DIRT AND EXPOSING THE PROTAGONIST A NEW AND BETTER MAN?

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Valerie Dohren 18 March 2012

A magnificent poem Smoky, enjoyed reading very much. Rain can be so refreshing, although I have to confess that I usually have a good old moan when it starts! !

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Dave Walker 18 March 2012

A really beautiful poem, really like it. A wonderful write.

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