Rain Comments

Absolutely love this poem, deep and insightful, and very well rhymed.

This really got to me: 'and so I came like a child of night into your eternal, ethereal light; ' You have a wonderful way with words and imagery. The only kink I see is overuse of adjectives, which almost makes the scene contrived. 'mossy, marbeled' is a bit much. However, I could see myself watching the entire scene with a bit of wonder. Well done.

I got goose bumps just reading this. You set the scenery just perfect.

Rain, the voice of the sky...The sweet life begin with small drops of raindrops and love when it fall and sounds like humming...serenity :) just the way you said here...The seeds crying happiness to release the root and shoots, the sand smiling for stop the thirstiness and rain is a blessing comes around for life bound :) _Unwritten SOul