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A dropp down poem, I've written a dropp down poem too. It's called 'I wish I Were A Tear Falling From Your Eyes'..but the subject Matter is different from your poem. You've got the poem bang-on, the viscious life is so simply yet impactfully portrayed here, Preets

This is a really great poem. It really shows the cycle of life and the world and puts everything into proportion to show that what is happening to you really isn't that bad and it has already happened to many people before you and will continue to happen to many people after you.