Friday, April 9, 2010

Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pit! Pat! Pit! Pat
And here comes the rain
Like a beautiful river, originating from the skies
Accompanied by lightening cast and then..
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varsha priyadarshini
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Jazib Kamalvi 03 December 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Varsha P. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Afzal Shauq 19 April 2010

sure its a very sweet poem with rich idea..lovely write

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Ramya Bodi 13 April 2010

ok very interesting! i encourage u to write more enthusiastically......

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