Sunday, April 4, 2010

*rain Comments

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A salty mist swirls around us,
Landing on our skin,
And tangling in our hair
As we sit on the golden sand,
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 01 October 2011

rain will always be a magical thing nice poem i also have a poem about about rain Friend Rain

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Adeline Foster 27 September 2011

A lovely tribute to such a commen thing as rain. Happens I wrote one with the same name - Rain - please read. Adeline

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Abdallah Gamal 11 September 2011

'Our eyes meet, and I can’t help laughing, Such joy and wonder it brings, To share this fantastical moment with you, I hope it teaches you to love the rain. ' I love this stanza I'll use it as status on fb: D it's a gr8 work, i love it :)

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Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. 01 September 2011

People cover their heads when it rains, but I usually bathe in the rain because I love it.

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