Atomized ocean, sun powered, airlifted,
With thunder and lightning, breaks
Eternal silence of infinite space.
Unknown what is it holding when it falls, yet
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Monsoons....... I love it, your just getting better with ever line and verse.
Immensely beautiful lines on rain.A glamorous version of rain.A big 10+++++++.Thank you so much for sharing this brilliant poetry with all of us.
The beginning of the poem is too captivating with impressive touch. How rain appears is astutely inscribed through nice penmanship as.....Atomized ocean, sun powered, airlifted, With thunder and lightning, breaks Eternal silence of infinite space. A beautiful poem amazingly shared.10
excellently penned- world wide waterfalls of existence Emptying itself on what the world survives- Failed or excess, all is derailed.
with thunder and lightning, breaks eternal silence of infinite space...... beautiful. Ask you freely, is really there silence eternal without chaotic noise of speedy movement of celestial bodies in the space infinite! Sure you are about its soundlessness or you can't imagine its violent chaos beyond your conceiving capability as a human entity!
I have read many poems on rain but this is a different kind of poem with different taste! The beauty of poetic expression is captivating! This poem is a wonderful ode to Rain! ....Or world wide waterfalls of existence/Emptying itself on what the world survives-Failed or excess, all is derailed……! Magnificent piece of poetry! (10)
Yes, Peace is of interest to me. Thank you for the reference!
Celestial shower of mercy Man's earth turned desire It is crafted so well that readers could capture the image you tried to portray herein. Enjoyed reading it!
Good imaginations makes it a nice poem and likes it.
wonderful shower of words that brings a new lease to life........................simply put yet so sweeeeeeeeeet. wish I could get such aweetness in time.......... :)
Beautiful poem, I am highly happy to go through yours high thoughts
Man's earth turned desire. celestial shower of mercy rain speak with you
The life blood of mother Earth