Atomized  ocean,  sun  powered, airlifted, 
With  thunder  and  lightning,  breaks
Eternal  silence     of    infinite  space.
Unknown  what is it  holding  when  it falls, yet
Blessed from above  despite unclear sky, 
As  if  immensity  taps  at  our  life
Either  as  celestial   shower  of  mercy
Or  world wide  waterfalls  of  existence
Emptying  itself  on  what  the  world  survives-
Failed  or  excess,  all is  derailed.
What's  by  birth   creation  whole, unique  taste, 
Free  its  service,  humanity its  faith, 
Ever  bent  to  put  on level  with  heaven
Man's  earth  turned  desire.                
waterfalls of existance took my fancy.Try 'Storm' if time permits. regards O great one.
Monsoons....... I love it, your just getting better with ever line and verse.
Immensely beautiful lines on rain.A glamorous version of rain.A big 10+++++++.Thank you so much for sharing this brilliant poetry with all of us.
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I would like to translate this poem
i adore this poem i love the rain its beautiful great! ! ! ! amazingly awesome