Rain Comments
the sun and moon
the wind and rain
all this come to me
for a gain..and
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' the sun and moon the wind and rain all this come to me for a gain..and it's my love..i refrain....' Thats beautiful write here A raining beauty indeed. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+
An easy and effotless flow that is as refreshing like rain.
the sun and moon the wind and rain all this come to me for a gain..and it's my love..i refrain wow... the meaning of this hits the very soul of the reader. very much well done. :) im a fan.. officially.
even if i were in a drain the sun will pick me up .................... Nice message. Nice flow of your words..And I love it
nice poem, but i felt its so plain and general, it has nothing special to describe about rain, i thought the poem fully would be depicting a rainy day... as a general poem its fine....
nice words and phrases, deep meanings........sun and moon coming to one for gain and I refrain............ moon floating in a swift wind that unveils a bride and sun picking up one with the torch that gives moon its glow........good flow.....I am still pondering over the message it tries to give........U make me think
Good flow of words, really a very nice poem on rain.10.Read mine also let me feel the rain & kissing rain.
Nice time for such a poem! Its our retreating monsoon with cold showers and a mild sun and a ghostly moon!
how lovely the rain, pouring out love in every field how lovely the rain if it pour just right to each craving ground quenching the terrain's thirst supplying man's requirements none flood to drain none calamity to mule over as rain sustain just right, just right to our needs and gains...... lovely poem Sam thanks for the inspiration that you have given me now to write this piece! ! !
Nice descriptive poem about the nature, wonderful metaphors well embedded to obtain a special poetical image.The poet's relationship with nature is very fine highlighted in those lines where the poem has an allegorical character. Lovely to read 10++++++++++
You have created a beautiful romanic connection between nature to bring us this lovely poem. Really great. 10 love Karin
I ofen think of rain as Ram's paint brush every time it rains new colors appear on the earth.10
You bring in a new air of romanticism to Rain...lovely piece.10
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8/21/2025 10:03:32 AM # 1.0.0
It is sad that, sun disappears, when it time for moon to come, Or moon disappears when sun arrives, When water comes near to fire, the fire disappeared.