Tuesday, September 1, 2009

Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

The clouds are black
The lightning striking

With the thunderstorm
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Asma Khan 14 January 2018

your Rhim Jhim Part is so funny, isnt?

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Obinna Eruchie 04 October 2009

Pearl-drops that fall from the sky, both for pleasure and pain. Emotional.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2009

Pour and make our lands fertile Rain, rain, rain Rim jhim, rim jhim, Tup, tup, tup, tup. it is beautiful gift fromGod andwhowering with complete grace. we should make every rain dropp with complete use.... i loved the poem....10 read mine rain delay.. rain has come... o, merci rain God..dark clouds

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 September 2009

the rain symbolically many fold meaningful! nice wording! excellent flow! loved much-->rim jhim rim jhim! 10+

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Jaideep Garg 02 September 2009

such a rainy poem...with lots of mother nature... i loved it mam.... its simply oosham... u must be a country music kind of mam...

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