Friday, June 12, 2009

Rain Comments

Rating: 3.5

The laughter dies away,
Leaving me alone,
Looking for one person,
that person is my dad.
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Shay Chesney
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Danny H 13 August 2009

I love the rain, and is one of my favorite things. I love the way it looks, its sorrow in each drop The puddles the design in the puddles the feeling on your skin Such a deep intent poem but lovely as well keep it up

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Obinna Eruchie 16 June 2009

Sad, but touching to read.

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Rochelle Bell 15 June 2009

ohhh shay thatz beautiful/sad! ! !

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Marieta Maglas 12 June 2009

''tell him that i'm searching, For the man that i called dad with more hope that i've ever had'' lovely to read...

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Shay Chesney

Shay Chesney

Kelowna B.C
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