Sunday, June 7, 2009

Rain Comments

Rating: 3.5

It falls from the sky
and lands on my arm.
i wipe over the rain drop
and i begin to ponder a thought.
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Tracey Owens
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Eyan Desir 13 June 2009

Well crafted 10s keep it up

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Carol Gall 07 June 2009

many small things make a difference good poem

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 June 2009

Nicely expressed rain...nice poem.

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and faith like a mustard seed can move a mountain

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