Thursday, April 16, 2009

Rain Comments

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The pool of water calmly waits beneath the darkened sky
Her glassy face sleeps peacefully to a silent lullaby
As black raindrops descend from their dark abode on high
Falling down like painful tears to the place where she now lies
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Luke Bushen
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Shutter Queen 16 April 2009

BRAVO! A wonderful write.

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