Saturday, February 14, 2009

Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

From clouds
to soil
to rivers
through hills
...
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Jim French
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As this is written just like a waterfall I went down with it on a journey. I didn't really like crashing, but it was worth it to get to your last line. So descriptive, so beautifully written. Top marks Karin Anderson

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Bullion Grey 04 April 2009

Kinda formed in the sense of a nature study, with quips and turns, softly set.....Of course I am no judge of poetry..but I liked it. BG

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This is a refreshing down pour. keep it raining.

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Eyan Desir 25 February 2009

Very creative, well set up men. tht was beautiful 10/10

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