Only a cynic can dismiss
This phenomenon as a
Rather mundane affair,
The ongoing alchemy of love,
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When an infatuated cloud Liquefied in the courteous tempo Of his fiery romance During a seductive season of rain, ...beautiful very beautiful...you know how to take readers with you to beautiful imaginery world....it surely is a superb write, thanks 10++++
This is a great imagery lu captured so beautifully. But I feel u could have used some other word instead of 'critic'; like 'skeptic'. Think over...10
You know the art of giving fine words to your beautiful thoughts and emotions... A beautfiful poem indeed... Regards, Kamran
Truly poetic......great imagery.......10+++++