Friday, October 31, 2008

Rain Comments

Rating: 3.4

Only a cynic can dismiss
This phenomenon as a
Rather mundane affair,
The ongoing alchemy of love,
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Seema Aarella
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Sathyanarayana M V S 12 November 2008

Truly poetic......great imagery.......10+++++

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premji premji 12 November 2008

sweat of sun pours down monsoon... ha..ha.ha

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Aijaz Asif 05 November 2008

When an infatuated cloud Liquefied in the courteous tempo Of his fiery romance During a seductive season of rain, ...beautiful very beautiful...you know how to take readers with you to beautiful imaginery world....it surely is a superb write, thanks 10++++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 October 2008

This is a great imagery lu captured so beautifully. But I feel u could have used some other word instead of 'critic'; like 'skeptic'. Think over...10

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Dr Kamran Haider 31 October 2008

You know the art of giving fine words to your beautiful thoughts and emotions... A beautfiful poem indeed... Regards, Kamran

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Joseph Poewhit 31 October 2008

GOD sends angels as helpers in life

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Seema Aarella

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