Wednesday, October 15, 2008
Rain Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Walking in the rain
Clenses us of what pretend to be
Those who run are bearly sprinkled,
Pretenders who won’t show there true selves
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Halina Nettelfield
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15 October 2008
coolies i like it, what a first poem! there might be some spelling errors but i think that adds character. clapeddy clapp and so on pretty much thats an applause
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8/2/2025 6:44:26 PM # 1.0.0
FINALLY! someone who feels the way i do. Congrats Halina. you have my friendship. good job