~rain Comments

Oh, well, if you're going to add horses to your poem, you have me captivated! ! ! Very nice extended metaphor and very pleasantly written throughout! Enjoyed the ride immensely! ! !

Oh very well done and nice,

When the rain does pour it is also likened to thousands of tap dancers dancing on the rooftop. The sound is like music to the ears especially when lying under soft covers which has a calming effect on the senses. Very good write and love it.

Peaceful loving rain! Your poem helped to gain connection with own self. Loved the motion of the drops of life, their sound so beautifully described, admirable pen, thank you for share!

Brilliant Adeline, enjoyed reading - though we are all a bit fed up with those tiny footsteps here in the UK, we've had more than our fair share of late.

I really enjoyed the analogy here Miss Adeline - another 10 in my book!

Such a nice flow of the poem, like rain keep on pouring the imagery in words and let the readers be interested down to the last stanza. Refreshing indeed.

I like the sound of the rain minus the thunder and lightning :) . a poem well done.

i could imagine what you seeing in your downy cover. picture clear. thank you very much for sharing

How we can take a moment in time and expand the senses beyond the norm. All in the shelter from the storm. Well done, my dear.