The skies are overcast
But will the clouds last?
Or will they slide across the sky
And simply pass us by
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i love the anticipation in this, and the relief in the end that indeed the rain has come... beautiful and touching...
Amazing poem bringing forth the purifying power of rain and delivering hope into the darkest corners of the heart.Thank you, Sandra.10+++... Best wishes. A.
hopes and expectations...these are the leading lights in life...a theme well conceived artfully told...10
A wonder in your words, Sandra. The 'raindrop' a desire to many. Very nice
Patience, observation and acceptance fulfills a desire. 'Rain' says this. As if communicating with nature. And nature delivers what is wished. This is an interesting poem on several levels of thought. Congratulations. A nice write, Sandra.
Excellent write Sandra...and yes it is one of the things we can't live without...10
the last stanza speaks of volume..of positive and expectant heart and hope. Thank you for this wonderful message of hope
all will soon be well....in those few lines you brought a town..people...cattle..and the atmosphere...great
A very vivid picture painted well here Sandra of the conditions assailing your area and of the welcome rains...... your last line gives positive hope that 'all will soon be well' - - and only those who endure drought will appreciate what that really means....... thank you - and 10 for the excellent imagery..... from Fay...
ah! exceptional, what a heartwarming poem? full of hope and fulfillment.