Rain Comments
Suddenly this defeat.
This rain.
The blues gone gray
And the browns gone gray
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Well articulated and nicely brought forth with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing.
Yes by now you know what I am going to say but... It is really tiresome that I and perhaps you cannot rate poems anymore because some messed up computer thingee can only respond to a vote by demanding we sign in again and again and again. Really getting tiresome. Neither can I track down the comments that notifications to my e-mail tell me about.
I like this poem. It is not just interesting - it has emotional impact as well and I got invested in it. I'd give it a 10 but you know by now why I can't... don't you?
The blues gone gray Expressing the impermanence of nature. Change is the only constant thing. Nice one! Sylva-Onyema Uba
The people who are not you. In the absence of one who was loved, all that was once bright becomes dreary grey rain. Haunting.
This rain brings happiness and woes at the same time. Very nice.
it is hard to see things when it starts to pour down with rain, especially in a deluge?
Tears are falling like raindrops+++++++++++++ Thanks for sharing++++++++++
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7/25/2025 9:54:07 AM # 1.0.0
It's very soulful, a must read poem especially when it's raining.