Beads of water freed
From the clutches of the clouds
A mystery song.
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A great haiku that forces us to analyze your words. Great job.
Rain... both the poems present novel imagery... loved them..
Even though water moves in mysterious ways it always finds it's own level?
A lovely little poem on mystery of nature! An admirable contemplation................................10
All functions in nature are mysterious only...not exceptional the rain too...lovely
Rereading this cutest brevity, a most beautiful haiku. The 5-7-5 format. Each rain has its own Song, since we never know how hard or few the rainfalls are, thus a Mystery Song. Most beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
No doubt, there is something magical about rains. And I am keenly awaiting rains here which should strike the southern coast anytime now. I hope 'beads of water are freed from the clutches of the clouds'. And am I seeing the droplets falling, soon I hope!
Countless songs about rain have been enjoyed by millions of music lovers.... I am one of them. Reminds me of the song I LIKE CHOPIN popularized by GAZEBO.... I love this haiku, dear ate Rose....10++++++++
Wow! .. Ever such beauty and feeling captured in theses lines! .. Beautifully sung, beautifully moving! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! ..10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .................+++++
Songs of nature on earth! ! Rain from Heaven. 🤗🖋 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Beautiful little poem, dear Poetess Rose Marie - a mystery song it is! Thank you with a full score.
A magnificent poem about Rain again but this is different., indeed a different Song, a mystery song and that can be in all kinds of tunes and melodies. IF it is raining, just listen to the melody. Each time another melody indeed a mystery song. Like a painting framed loveliest by the great poetess. A 10+++++++++++++++++++++++
Heavy rain showers created, more exception than the rule. Here is mystery involved, and I have the wish to be able to may hear this mystery song, IF I may.................................
A wonderful release of words!