Tuesday, June 10, 2008

Rain Comments

Rating: 4.1

rain
rain, rain, rain heal my heart that is broken apart
rain, rain, rain up above from the skies
rain, rain, rain pour here and clean my soul
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shameka jones
COMMENTS
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 30 August 2014

simple wording, yet rhythmic and appealing. Kind I love.

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* Sunprincess * 11 July 2014

.........very nicely written....the rain can do all this....

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Vanessa Smith 15 August 2013

Wow....just, wow.............

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Lilly Rose 03 March 2010

Love it Think you hit a spot there

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Leah Farmer 25 August 2009

I absolutley love this poem. i looked through all types of poems and none of them spoke to me the way yours did. I LOVE IT! ! ! !

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Kareema Muhammad 31 July 2009

hay i really luve ur poem :)

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Your Mama 09 June 2009

suckish

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Bussaba Kulkittiyanon 30 January 2009

I love this poem because of rain is a nature which similar to tears from heaven.

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Kalan Rider 25 July 2008

it reminds me of god

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Ryan Thompson 24 July 2008

i hope rain washes it all way, i like how you show that you can be healed and what not O.o

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Greenwolfe 1962 15 June 2008

I love repetition of words in poetry. Its one of the things that makes poetry. I thought you covered every base you needed to and that kept it short enough to be a worthwhile read. GW62

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Kashumaru Mizume 15 June 2008

I think that was an interesting and touching piece. I remember how I felt when I was upset and how I loved to be just in the rain when I cried, allowing it to blend into my tears and calm my body and soul. Such a wonderful piece once more. Excellent job.

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