rain
rain, rain, rain heal my heart that is broken apart
rain, rain, rain up above from the skies
rain, rain, rain pour here and clean my soul
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I absolutley love this poem. i looked through all types of poems and none of them spoke to me the way yours did. I LOVE IT! ! ! !
I love this poem because of rain is a nature which similar to tears from heaven.
i hope rain washes it all way, i like how you show that you can be healed and what not O.o
I love repetition of words in poetry. Its one of the things that makes poetry. I thought you covered every base you needed to and that kept it short enough to be a worthwhile read. GW62
I think that was an interesting and touching piece. I remember how I felt when I was upset and how I loved to be just in the rain when I cried, allowing it to blend into my tears and calm my body and soul. Such a wonderful piece once more. Excellent job.
simple wording, yet rhythmic and appealing. Kind I love.