Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Rain Comments

Rating: 4.8

Rain drops keep fallin in my hair
Since you been gone im so out of place
This love i have to fight
Hes on my mind all the time
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keturah bailey
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Serenity Prayer 15 December 2008

i can really relate to this one. this one is my favorite. great job.

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Hannah Martin 23 October 2008

I like this poem! Very well written...rythems on and off (which isn't that very good) but other than that...It's lovely! :)

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Subham Dutta 10 September 2008

Hi Keturah Bailey, This is a very good poem.

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Abbey Rigney 28 June 2008

this is really good: ]] I luv it

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Christopher Leone 30 May 2008

your a great poet...expressing good emotion, you should write about the strengh in yourself without needing or wanting... :)

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