Rain - 1 Comments

We can be like a parched field or a well watered plant!

A great gift to plants means to all.very intelligent writing Mam.

gift to plants......fine. Thank u. anjandev roy.

Wow! A wonderful poem...short but highly expressive! The fabulous use of simile 'penetrate like bullets' is the epitome of this amazing work...............10

ADDITION: since you have read it like a jetplane in the sky. So OVER. Read this precious poem slowly and let the words penetrate your mind. I like very much this brevity from the Great Poetess. Thank you so much for sharing. God's Blessings in Abundance for thee and thy beloved family. Amen...............Sent with love and care, Sylvia FC

My first impression having read the poem, WOW! A Powerful Poem. Truly, with the word BULLETS and penetrate, this poem's power increases........reading poems we can do that in several ways, but ONE THING we must giove to poems when reading GIVE IT TIME. No time? Don't read, but never hustle, the quality will decrease.

Rain... penetrate likes bullets, I love that imagery, its powerful, potent and precise, it fertilizes the mind with fresh images.10 Plus!

Imagining a parched land and a green fertile land we will definitely learn the value of rain...nice capture of rain in a cute poem...thank you Rose for all your comments on my poems

I don't think haiku can get any better than this. Sterling imagery.

What a loveliest haiku the 5-7-5 format. How very interesting is this haiku. A most deserving haiku from the great poetess. Thank you so much for sharing this most important haiku about the seasonal rain. The plants and all other greens are truly thankful. A captivating haiku. Love reading this haiku time and again.

But they are rubber bullets perhaps, warning green plants to stand firm rain, storm, or hot sun... Good write

Simply heavenly haiku, dear Ate Rose........10++++++++++++

Ever so moving to nature and life! .. Beautifully and powerfully painted! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! ..10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ................+++++

Rain drops! ! Watering the plants. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Rain is the best gift ever for plants, trees and the entire green vegetation. A succinct poem so well worded.

Brilliant brevity and such a powerful metaphor. Indeed tropical rains can be so strong and can penetrate the dry ground like bullets a great gift to plants, This must be about the tropical rains. A very impressive poem about Rain. Thank you so much for sharing.10+++++++++++

Plants clean the atmosphere And animals breath A great gift to life. A wonderful poem.