Prabhat Kumar Sahoo

Prabhat Kumar Sahoo

316, Baramunda, Bhubaneswar-751003, Odisha, India
Friday, August 25, 2017

Rails Lying Comments

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Rails Lying


Rails parallel lying long
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Prabhat Kumar Sahoo
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Bharati Nayak 02 June 2024

A wonderful poem! Life and death run parallel.We can never imagine life without death.The difference between these two parallel lines gradually blur and at some point they become one.

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Mj Lemon 05 September 2017

Life and death co-exist...In fact, as you suggest, the distance between the two is as slim and slender as a rail tie. A brilliant poem.

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 05 September 2017

Thanks for your kind comments.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 September 2017

Muse! ! Life and death! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 05 September 2017

Thanks dear EKL.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 August 2017

We often see dead bodies on rails or accidents at cross by collide. Dear Prabhat you have nicely inscribed this here in brief. Beautiful haiku on life shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 26 August 2017

Thanks for inspiration.Regards.

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Bichitra Anand 25 August 2017

Really, life runs parallel with a thought of death always.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 25 August 2017

Rails parallel lying long Left is life, right, the death Wait to collide at a cross. Beautiful haiku making me remember the recent tragedy in U.P. Thanks for the poem. 10+ for it.

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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 25 August 2017

Yes, it is heart tearing.Thanks.

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Prabhat Kumar Sahoo

Prabhat Kumar Sahoo

316, Baramunda, Bhubaneswar-751003, Odisha, India
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