Saturday, June 1, 2019

Raging Wind Comments

Rating: 4.7

The wind is in rage
All bowed to its great fury
Which way should we flee?
...
Read full text

Rose Marie Juan-austin
COMMENTS
Nabakishore Dash 20 May 2022

Nature's fury makes us baffled Madam Rose.

0 0 Reply
Valsa George 20 March 2020

Some of the forces of Nature are so terrifying! A cyclone or a violent wind sweeps uncontrollably uprooting trees and toppling down buildings. Man becomes so helpless before its violent fury. You have captured the wind's tameless rage in these three short lines.

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 03 February 2020

Typhoons are a usual natural catastrophe in your part of the world. Nice eloquent depiction of anxiety 10+

0 0 Reply
Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2019

Absolutely a brilliant three liner.....powerful poetic expression! I derive enormous pleasure in reading this great poem of substance!

0 0 Reply
Tamara Beryl Latham 12 November 2019

Wow! Profound. Though the words are few, we can all feel the wind's wrath.

0 0 Reply
Dr Dillip K Swain 19 August 2019

A fabulous three liner! My great pleasure revisiting this wonderful work of yours!

1 0 Reply
Jane Campion 16 July 2019

We feel the power of this poem.

1 0 Reply
Valsa George 01 July 2019

We shudder before Nature's violent rage, be it a hurricane, flood or earthquake! Man's helplessness is exposed during such mishaps! Brief, but powerful!

1 0 Reply
Dr Dillip K Swain 22 June 2019

An insightful little piece of work with notable impression with fascinating imagery! 'Wind' here is personified...A moving write on nature...10

1 0 Reply
Prabir Gayen 11 June 2019

The wind is in rage All bowed to its great fury Which way should we flee? .. ...fine Haiku

1 0 Reply
Anjandev Roy 05 June 2019

its great fury. Well penned. Thank u. Anjandev Roy.

2 0 Reply
Nosheen Irfan 04 June 2019

A poetic gem. Lovely imagery.

2 0 Reply
Sylvia Frances Chan 04 June 2019

As far as I know, raging winds are to find in the Typhoon regions and the Hurricane areas, all over the world. The most destructing rain type that causes many many victims. Excellently worded haiku, dear great poetess. I have enjoyed a very lot. Thank you for sharing. A 10++++++++++++++++++++++ for the voting, PH said. God Blesses.

3 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad 03 June 2019

A timely warning, we need another Noah who can make a rescue arch. Perhaps nature wants to reduce the over population of this world now facing a shortage of resources. Yes, we have no way to flee.

2 0 Reply
Bernard F. Asuncion 02 June 2019

Many states in the US are in danger of being whipped by howling hurricanes and strong storms. We pray for the safety of millions of citizens over there. A well crafted haiku, dear Ate Rose.... I love the way you picture the frightening situation........10+++++++++++++

3 0 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2019

The power of nature! ! ! ! With the muse of the wind. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

3 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 02 June 2019

And now my rake.... A storm fells huge trees which stand stiff in its way, but does not harm lowly grass, small plants that bend and let it pass. Respect Nature's fury.

3 0 Reply
Unnikrishnan E S 01 June 2019

Hi Rose Marie, I have a different take on the poem, than my dear poet Anilji. I look at it from a philosophical angle. Life is a ship in the high seas, where wind takes on it from all directions.

3 0 Reply
Anil Kumar Panda 01 June 2019

All are helpless before nature's fury. Nice poem.

2 0 Reply
Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
Close
Error Success