Friday, June 8, 2018

Ragged Trouser's Revisited (2018) Comments

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O' not to be in England
Now there is not so much joy?
With worker's losing job's
And a Government out to destroy
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Tom Allport
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Bri Edwards 11 February 2019

here is a challenge for you Tom. in 2019, see if you can cut down on your use of apostrophes (where they aren't supposed to be) . and where is the cheery poem? you know. the one where EVERYBODY gets everything a person could want, anytime s/he wants it! i hope your luck holds out. bri (:

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 June 2018

A very perceptive write on the injustices of government. A government that should protect but instead it destroys. A meaningful piece of work 10

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