Rumble of sparkling,
awaking the peace hating,
monster minded,
licking the victory songs,
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what a great words....god bless you and thank you for sharing this with me
and sun eaten by eclipse, and the blood of civil, quenching the thirst of evil, and the suicidal bombers invading the streets, ..................devil is rasing head agn quenching the thirst of evil and sending the sucial bombers to tear us apart.... we got to bevigilant on this issue... beautiful write and i appiricate the constructive thought....10 read mine martyres....blood all over...bullet proff....pora pora pora
Profound thoughts, well penned, to lament one of our saddest, present day, world issues
and the suicidal bombers invading the streets, with virulent aims, poisoning the ears, with their outcasted lies. this invisible enemy, carcinogen to life, hiding in the laps of civilization Wanting terminate, The days and nights, To smokes of darkness.. Thank you for highlighting the evils of war...it is really cancer of the so called civil societies who sell the WMD, produced in response to and in the name of those powerless people who see no end to the war....
yes fine poetic reaction penned beautifully! terorism shud halt down wherever it is.. 10+
this is a very powerful poem, I like your style of poetry very much, vivid lines of few words.thanks for sharing, Rafique. Y.M.
Blood of civil, quenching.........of evil, really a touching and socially relevant piece.nicely paced and rhymed too. Thanks 4 sharing
night walkers are not only terrorist..night walkers include special forces..well, this is well written..
You have written a very bold poem on terrorism prevailing all over the world with a blend of History. Well-done Rafique. Regards Naseer
my my...some poem..with contemporay insanity in sharp focus... coudnt have painted a better pic.. harrowing situation...put in words...so as to touch and prod...makes you wail and think too thamx for this wonderful piecse tenner it is and wow
very nice poem, deep thoughts, well embedded 10/10