Sunday, June 26, 2016

Rage Comments

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Ability to think is stolen away
Thoughts are in a mess, a muddle.
Calmness drowned in a red pool.
Commotion and chaos were friends.
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Della Perry
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Bri Edwards 31 October 2016

Della, you switch verb tenses; this seems out of place, BUT you are the poet! when you mentioned 'escalator', i at first thought you were talking about an actual-in-a-store-escalator. maybe an irate person was riding it? but then i decided 'no'. this poem does pretty well giving the feeling of escalating feelings culminating in RAGE! : (: ( bri ;) maybe they sold out of the shoes you were searching for?

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