Thursday, March 11, 2010

Radical Life Of Juno Comments

Rating: 5.0

Juno is a perfect model for a strong and passionate child and woman
She was totally broke and indeterminate, having an uncertain clan
Sowing for her living which was needed
Inspite of the downers outdoor and was outrageous, indeed
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Sheldon Allen Saluta
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Kranthi Pothineni 21 March 2010

Sad theme with a hope. I liked your narration and story telling skill.

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Auty Paul Jason 13 March 2010

I know one thing for sure, I don't want to live like her. This poem show the sad part in life. Deep thought.

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Suman Dutta 11 March 2010

A story told in poetic form. You have done a good job of depicting the sadness and the struggle in the life of Juno. Well done, keep writing.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 11 March 2010

A sad poem yet full of hope..I'm sure there more Junos than we'd like to think. Well written piece of work Sheldon. a 10

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good write.. i like the positivity of it.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 11 March 2010

yes... i can see that... There is a man named Juno in Asia in history and he is a great person... i think this is like his lady version

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