Friday, January 11, 2019

Radiant Heat Comments

Rating: 4.5

Radiant heat
makes warm feet
a toasty feeling for sure
I want to hug the floor
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Aqua Flower
COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 14 January 2019

Thanks for sharing such a fond, personal memory, dear poetess. Loved to read the 'Poet's Notes.

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Aqua Flower 15 January 2019

After the fear went away from seeing him laying there lifeless on the floor and realizing he was only sleeping, it became a fond memory. You could imagine the first reaction. Thank you for your comment! :)

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Carl Roussell 11 January 2019

A fond memory for sure.

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Aqua Flower 15 January 2019

Yes it was after we realilzed he was sleeping.... :)

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M Asim Nehal 11 January 2019

Sure 10/10 for this short poem.

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M Asim Nehal 11 January 2019

Oh great one and the poet's note made it further interesting.

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Aqua Flower 15 January 2019

Thank you for the read and appreciating the story!

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