Monday, November 25, 2013

Rachel's Rain Comments

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I could hear Rachel's cries
her tears falling into a sea of noise
as memories of the night passed before my eyes
cab rides with friends with words about boys
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Fox Nekitsune
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Buyi Newton Philip 30 November 2013

this is amazing Fox Nekitsune, is it okay if we became pals, which friendship today will lead us to great success tomorrow

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Poet Dragon 28 November 2013

Beautiful. Perspective: Laying on the ground, looking up into the blurry face of a friend...on the cusp of ultimate realization.

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Dima Sviridenko 26 November 2013

Realy not bad) i like such kind of poems.

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