Saturday, March 25, 2017

Race With Shadows Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know I can't hide
from shadows inside
they follow wherever I go
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 27 March 2017

A profound write that touches upon a lot of things. Sums up life in a few verses. Man's whole life is a race with shadows. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 27 March 2017

It certainly seems that way at times doesn't it. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 March 2017

Beautiful poem with great imaginary. Thrilling expression. True dictum on death and deceit.Enjoyed with attractive photo provided. Thanks.

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Barry Middleton 26 March 2017

...and rest and peace. In the end I believe fear may morph into anticipation. Thanks for the comment. I appreciate it.

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Dimitrios Galanis 25 March 2017

Τhe hero seems contented being left in the darkness without sun's shadows following him.Since sun is regarded as the life's symbol, have we to suppose that he thinks that he would be happier after life? Nicely pictured.

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Barry Middleton 25 March 2017

Well, at the present time, he hopes so. As the least he will find rest which he has had precious little of. We all have out demons that we would like to escape from.

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Unwritten Soul 25 March 2017

Beautiful poem, the words flowing so nicely to my mind, easily penetrate my imaginary thoughts and to feel...and the picture you shared do create an echoes to this feeling! wonderful poem and picture. They complement each other

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Barry Middleton 25 March 2017

Thank you for the praise. I search for the right picture and sometimes find it. Glad you liked the poem.

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