Race Day Comments

Go Mike Go! I understand your pain and elation. Running is like that isn't it. It goes in phases when the body and mind go in and out of sync... And then when running a long race, there's all those other variables. I ran a marathon once. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing. One suggestion I learned from a poetry group I recently attended... Try taking out unnecessary pronouns and be verbs (like was) and see how it affects the movement, rhythm, flow, and pace of the poem. Just food for thought I recently learned and have been applying. Thanks!

If I was there I would have cheered for you too buddy. What a fine accomplishment, Both the poem and the marathon.

if they cheered you they must have been ecstatic about the old lady