Race Against The Wishes Comments

A deep poem telling us of the devilish drive with which we immerse ourselves just to achieve a wish, a dream, a desire, only to find an emptiness after the goal is achieved and all the applause is done. Very nicely written.

Wishes of evergreen tree are amazing really. Beyond the edges our desires grow to hold the earth. This poem is excellently penned...10

An insightful piece of work! Liked the second stanza most..well penned my friend...10

All is gone to reach nothingness.. insightful poem