Saturday, January 15, 2011

Rabbits Comments

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In a secret field nesting on a hill,
Where time it seems is standing still,
A warren of little rabbits sleep:
In burrows very quiet they keep.
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Matt Mooney
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Pranab K Chakraborty 28 January 2011

Poet, do you really know such a place where time stands still! Or, what do you want to make us communicate....would we have to be a white rabbit to get touch of that cool place! ! Beside all such questions, one thing is clear, at least entering the imagery of this writing, perhaps a little bit contact with such place as a reader we can get. And thank you for sharing such marvelous poem. Yes, time stands still inside the illusion of words. Regards, pranab 10+++

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