Thursday, February 2, 2006

Rabbits Comments

Rating: 5.0

At the mouth of the river where tall grasses grow,
Where no hunter hunts with hounds nor bugles blow,
Where the carefreeness of life lets rabbits roll -
My thoughts go scampering softly down a rabbit hole.
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Fred Rik Kesner 18 April 2006

There is such depth in your writing.

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Simone Inez Harriman 16 February 2006

Awesome Tan (10 from me)

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Emma Johnson 13 February 2006

The way you make your frantic and red-eyed thoughts mirror and echo the eventual horror of rabbits when they are caught in a 'haze of pain and hate' is absolutely brilliant and original.

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Bridgid Patrick 09 February 2006

This is very powerful work..sincerely. bridgid x

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 02 February 2006

I like this! It makes a statement that we all are victims of those we seek us out in the comforts of our 'nests' for sport and selfishness. L

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Gina Onyemaechi 02 February 2006

Rich description, distressing violence. Strong stuff. Kind regards, Gina.

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