Saturday, January 23, 2010

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You lost your loved ones in the sand and rubble,
and you struggle to accept it,
the pain almost unbearable.
I won't lie and say i understand,
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tanvi damle
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Such a beautiful poem, well pondered. thank you for that honest point of view 10\! ! !

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 13 March 2010

awesome poem, very soothing and honest. 'I won't lie and say i understand, but I will be there with you holding your hand.' wonderful friend, this line is very sincere and mature. i just loved the poem. thank you so much.

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Tom Golding 13 February 2010

A heartfelt sense of wishing to do more comes through which I share. Thank you for including me.

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Chitra - 27 January 2010

Heart felt feelings for the victims. A hope-driven write, igniting the spirit of courage within us all...

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Noel Horlanda 27 January 2010

'we shall get back on our feet'. This is a positive thought meaning don't just die, get back on your feet and fight back. I have also countrymen who perished in the tragedy - four UN Peace Keepers and two overseas workers who worked in a supermarket. I'm sure they were good men and women. I considered them as heroes. I prayed for their souls together with the poor and impoverish Haitians earthquake victims. Prayers are all that I can afford. This is a lovely dedication to all Haitian people. Thanks for sharing.

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Noel Horlanda 27 January 2010

'We shall get back on our feet' This is a positive line meaning don't just die, get back on your feet and fight back. I have also countrymen who died in the tragedy, four of them were UN peace keeper and two were overseas workers who worked in a supermarket. I prayed for their souls, they were good men and women and I considered them heroes. I prayed also for the earthquake victims the poor and impoverish Haitians. Prayers are all that I could afford. Anyway Tanvi, this piece is a lovely dedication to the people of Haiti. Thanks for sharing.

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Joseph Poewhit 25 January 2010

Heart felt feelings for the victims. Prayer to GOD will do the most.

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Blissful Anonymity 24 January 2010

nice one you have here.. much heart.. to me that's what differentiates art from others.. keep it up.. :)

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Whispering Rose 23 January 2010

a very meaningful poem... touches the heart, i love it.. our prayers and thaughts are with them

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 23 January 2010

A fine poem of hope and assurance. An ordinary gal becomes an extraordinary poetess. Really tragic and heart touching.Ur fellow feeling as a poet is commendable. U know how to extend personal love to people of a distressed land. Ur use of imagery and rhythm is superb dear. The very title shows ur attitude to the distressed people. A poet's silent sympathy is always an important ingredient for a good poem. Bravo! u have the courage to stand by the side of the distressed people. In 'Africa' Tagore stood by the side of the distressed people....Carry on Tanvi...we are with you

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Darlene Styles 23 January 2010

love it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! very inspirational..

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Leah Ayliffe 23 January 2010

Breathtaking, truly wonderful. I donated to Haiti last night, I think its beautiful how in such a disaterous world people can still come together to restore the hope and faith in humanity. Inspirational write!

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7he N0153 4nd 7he Fur9 23 January 2010

We will pray together, we will fight this together, I will do whatever I can to make it a little better. When you can't seem to sleep at night, I'll be there giving you hope, holding your hand tight Tanvi you are a true soul, and this poem is a definite work of deep emphatic genius.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 23 January 2010

The poem is not just about empty sympathy....it is also about empathy and above all very sensitively penned...keep writing.

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Merna Ibrahim 23 January 2010

Outstanding poem, your support has been sent in a good way....These people are really desperate and they need support from all the coutries..that earthquake was unbearble but unfortunately we cannot stop the natural phenomenons, only God'Almighty'so, God help them! ...Good Work :)

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 23 January 2010

It's truly wonderful.. A right thing in right moment for right people. They must know that they're not alone in this hour of grief.. Thanks for writing this poem, it speaks for all of us.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 January 2010

I'll be there with you every second, every minute. We shall take it one day at a time the pain will be gone and soon shall the sun shine......................we are all with you in this darkest hour.. shall render all the assistance we can...... lovely poem with deep anguish and feeligs.....10 read mine...haiti too

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 23 January 2010

thanks for sharing... i've added you in my friends' list... you can invite me any time to read your poems......

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Rajaram Ramachandran 23 January 2010

A confidence building poem to those victims who have survived after the earthquake.

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Wonderful words of hope my friend! 10/10

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