on a red carpet
where celebrities strut on ~~
this dead lady bug
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Perfect senryu. The chilling image stays with me. Perceptive and sensitive writing.
That's so sad. In the midst of celebrities, who pays attention to a small bug. Well done for recording it so beautifully.
I really felt for the poor lady bug, getting that emotion out is fine poetry, well done Govind.
Just love the contrast you draw between what is perceived as significant vs that which is not. Perfect 10+
I would like to see the roles reversed sometimes.: -) Another poignant poem from my talented young friend