Sunday, August 7, 2016

R.I.P (Senryu) Comments

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on a red carpet
where celebrities strut on ~~
this dead lady bug
...
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Govind Ramakrishnan
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COMMENTS
Kelly Kurt 07 August 2016

I would like to see the roles reversed sometimes.: -) Another poignant poem from my talented young friend

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Yuko Onishi 07 August 2016

Perfect senryu. The chilling image stays with me. Perceptive and sensitive writing.

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Guru Kothandaraman 07 August 2016

That's so sad. In the midst of celebrities, who pays attention to a small bug. Well done for recording it so beautifully.

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Gil Highlander 07 August 2016

I really felt for the poor lady bug, getting that emotion out is fine poetry, well done Govind.

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Stephen Park 07 August 2016

Just love the contrast you draw between what is perceived as significant vs that which is not. Perfect 10+

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