on a red carpet
where celebrities strut on ~~
this dead lady bug
© 2016
Perfect senryu. The chilling image stays with me. Perceptive and sensitive writing.
That's so sad. In the midst of celebrities, who pays attention to a small bug. Well done for recording it so beautifully.
I really felt for the poor lady bug, getting that emotion out is fine poetry, well done Govind.
Just love the contrast you draw between what is perceived as significant vs that which is not. Perfect 10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I would like to see the roles reversed sometimes.: -) Another poignant poem from my talented young friend