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Simply amazing poem that tackles the realities of life. A must - read for everyone. Onto my Poem List.10+++

The penultimate stanza vividly portrays the ills brought about by the transnational monopolists and cutthroat capitalists. Yes, the dreams of our youth are being sold and our future are being foreclosed.

Very informative, educational and well crafted and executed write. It expresses in detail and intelligent way why the middle class is sitting on top of a volcano when it comes to survival.

BRILLIANT write! A one of a kind piece of work. The four liner first stanza is so moving and gripping that will draw any reader to go through with the whole poem. And the one liner question gives more emphasis to this write.