R A P P O R T Comments

ill go along with rehana's interpret.... enjoyed it tc Rehana Nazli (9/14/2009 5: 00: 00 PM) Unlike Language In heart feel same) For thou is my love Tor jonne bhalobhasa amar Tere liey hai mohabbat mera For thou is my love I learnt a new language for a familiar message...soemthing different about your writting style!

very novel presentation, mischievous, thoughtful, innovative, construction, deconstruction- stylish all the way. read many times Sarwar. very interesting thoughts on Rapport. 10++ Mamta

Corrigendum: at least for me. NB

'Rapportiontoppositempowerment Lovehementrapportinglexcitellustre' Nice! ! But such juxtaposition of words and construct a [new] word mostly seen in Sanskrit and German* languages mostly seen in prose. To understand and to decipher such ‘made’ words require extra calorie plus such poems may put us in diction of ‘white-ink’ more and further [at for me] Wow and LOL Enjoyed and ten Sir. Ten+ Some where read largest numbers of alphabets in 1 word is in German language. Can readers help to get back that word? Ms Nivedita UK *As opined by Sd. Mujataba Ali Sahib… PS. Though Rabindranath Tagore made many such words: Dhukojaganiya, Ghoombhanganya in songs and poems etc. [easy to 1st languegers of Bengali] NB

yours is bright bitter sweet and chirpy as always a tenner from meeeeee anjuuuuuu

Unlike Language In heart feel same) For thou is my love Tor jonne bhalobhasa amar Tere liey hai mohabbat mera For thou is my love I learnt a new language for a familiar message...soemthing different about your writting style!

Lastly a fife, a war ship knocks all the world: no, our poet is not so angry, he seems to write: 'My lines, words are the trash of the other poems, let me joke! '. The Italian poet Aldo Palazzeschi wrote so and wasn't a bad poet.

Well expressed poem. Different but well penned Enjoyed reading it Thanks

am so honest ha, u know that, , , so, this time....i'll just say, i'll just come back again to read this and commnt..i can't understand what i read, so i'll be back, donworry..

the aroma of this new poem is mind blowing....complexities expressed in a complex way....excellent...nice to read something so different..keep writing..

From: Mary Spain (United Kingdom ;) To: Sarwar Chowdhury Date Time: 9/12/2009 12: 58: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: rapport Your poem well reflects our complex and complicated world. As you say, we could do with more simple living! Mary

well done.......10 +++

a novel way of expression..enjoyed this rhapsodic write

Very different, but an enjoyable clever poem. You get your point across, their is a harmony to your words. Thank you

a unique poem.......10

Unique write Sarwar, and excuse the pun..........you have a certain rapport with the reader, 10 Lynda xx

very very beautiful and great....

very strange but in a way good, keep up the good work

very original as usual.... good job

Stylish - novel - and very well thought out - - your enthusiasm hits every line.... quite unique Sarwar....