Quoth The Maven: "Never More".... [long; Humor; Loneliness; A Little Sex, And Food] Comments
One lonely, dark, and rainy night,
I picked my way out for a bite.
A bite to eat, I mean to say,
‘cause I was single for a many a day …
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Felt like reading a novel of Henry Fielding. I have gone through his novel 'Tom Jones'. Your style is the same but in Tom Jones he didn't discuss something that you have done here. Liked your creativity!
Well penned. You've used the chance, but the landlord spoilt everything. I pity you Bri. I hope you got home оr had to wait until the landlord went out? Anyway, you are here safe and sound. Keep writing.
Valentin, one minor correction to your lovely comment: I hope you got home оr had to wait until the landlord went out? please add an r to the second word here: ...or had to... and maybe a comma (,) after to wait thanks. bri ;)
Brian, you are quite right and I agree with a comma after to wait. But I don’t know how to correct or delete it. I can’t find which way I may do it. Sorry, Val
There's no dark and stormy night, but there is a nice torrid atmosphere. Something in this poem reminds me of Restoration comedy....Great work.
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Master Swain has saved my day, by reading and commenting in his own way. Now I plan to send my poem to 3 of my siblings and some others.