Been successful in love
Is like two sides of a coin
Hearts afraid to crack
Live without its other half
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Out of life's sweetest treasure The most valuable gift Is in the love of God. money and power blind everybody... it is great write with good thoughts...10 read mine golden words...i am disgrace and come home
A lot of truth in what you say. I believe that true love has to include suffering. Not all suffering has to be evil. This line interests me in particular: When tears wet the ground Minds will open wide. Gives me something to ponder.
Excellent quotes.! They are just so positive and uplifting and so totally wise too! I got something from them all. 10 Karin Anderson
Good insight! Only from experience do feelings come about. Important issues here. We help when we share and we learn when we care! Deborah Cromer
Nice poem, and important issues are included in sentences. It is worthwhile reading. I like it.(10) Greetings. Dagmara Anna
wow, very wise words Eyan, well it is word from a wise man to those who think or want to think....extremely well done... this goes to my favs :) Hataw
Loved ur lines.......My heart walked through a dessert But it didn't suffer from thirst Only through life's storm A soul can increase it's faith Winnie
I Do So Very Much LOVE This Poem Of Yours... The First Two Lines Grabed Me And Held Me Through The Whole Poem. It Is True That One May Never Know If The Love The Are In Will Land On Heads Or Tails - Good Or Bad. Keep Up Your Wonderful Work. -Mercedes E. Wilkerson
Very nice poem. I have issue with: Money and power isn't sucess But obstacles blinding man's eyes u may need to temper these two lines.
great job bro....expressed in your unique ways....keep penning
You and your love potions..! ! ! The love FOR God and IN humans definitely helps...... Amen. Cheers. Subroto
well this is beautiful one indeed! ! ! eyen...yet the case is it hurts so much when you try to make strong, friendships with people...when they break it hurts..... anyway great moving write as usual..10++ for this one.... if i was in a jolly mode i would've enjoyed this one better.... anyway great..
wise words all...the one about the mind opening when tears fall in the ground was very good.....10
Well it sounds more of a old man's lecture than a poem of wisdom And it is something I hv heard before, it would be better to have fresh sense of imagery and a unique style. xox
Yes very interesting indeed, nothing speeks more true than good wise words keep up the good work
Its indirect writing, but something about it rings true even in a non-faithful sense. Nicely done. The wise become wiser Whiles fools never learn And become bigger fools Really liked those three lines.
a wise write and beautiful presentation..........