Monday, June 22, 2009

.. Quotes For The Wise...** Comments

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Been successful in love
Is like two sides of a coin
Hearts afraid to crack
Live without its other half
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Eyan Desir
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rago rago 20 July 2009

a wise write and beautiful presentation..........

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Ronell Warren Alman 09 July 2009

This is a golden write Eyan! Keep on writing!

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Out of life's sweetest treasure The most valuable gift Is in the love of God. money and power blind everybody... it is great write with good thoughts...10 read mine golden words...i am disgrace and come home

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Ben Gieske 07 July 2009

A lot of truth in what you say. I believe that true love has to include suffering. Not all suffering has to be evil. This line interests me in particular: When tears wet the ground Minds will open wide. Gives me something to ponder.

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comatose 03 July 2009

very true love doctor, good write

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Jessie Mar 01 July 2009

I like the way you interpret life's lessons, insightful and wise.

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Excellent quotes.! They are just so positive and uplifting and so totally wise too! I got something from them all. 10 Karin Anderson

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Deborah Cromer 30 June 2009

Good insight! Only from experience do feelings come about. Important issues here. We help when we share and we learn when we care! Deborah Cromer

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Dagmara Anna 27 June 2009

Nice poem, and important issues are included in sentences. It is worthwhile reading. I like it.(10) Greetings. Dagmara Anna

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Little Hatila ;) 27 June 2009

wow, very wise words Eyan, well it is word from a wise man to those who think or want to think....extremely well done... this goes to my favs :) Hataw

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Winnie Angel 26 June 2009

Loved ur lines.......My heart walked through a dessert But it didn't suffer from thirst Only through life's storm A soul can increase it's faith Winnie

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Mercedes Wilkerson 26 June 2009

I Do So Very Much LOVE This Poem Of Yours... The First Two Lines Grabed Me And Held Me Through The Whole Poem. It Is True That One May Never Know If The Love The Are In Will Land On Heads Or Tails - Good Or Bad. Keep Up Your Wonderful Work. -Mercedes E. Wilkerson

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Sherif Monem 26 June 2009

Very nice poem. I have issue with: Money and power isn't sucess But obstacles blinding man's eyes u may need to temper these two lines.

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~ Jon London ~ 25 June 2009

great job bro....expressed in your unique ways....keep penning

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Subroto Chatterjee 25 June 2009

You and your love potions..! ! ! The love FOR God and IN humans definitely helps...... Amen. Cheers. Subroto

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Shashendra Amalshan 25 June 2009

well this is beautiful one indeed! ! ! eyen...yet the case is it hurts so much when you try to make strong, friendships with people...when they break it hurts..... anyway great moving write as usual..10++ for this one.... if i was in a jolly mode i would've enjoyed this one better.... anyway great..

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wise words all...the one about the mind opening when tears fall in the ground was very good.....10

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Dinika Nair 25 June 2009

Well it sounds more of a old man's lecture than a poem of wisdom And it is something I hv heard before, it would be better to have fresh sense of imagery and a unique style. xox

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Sinead Mc Cormick 25 June 2009

Yes very interesting indeed, nothing speeks more true than good wise words keep up the good work

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Fey Shane 25 June 2009

Its indirect writing, but something about it rings true even in a non-faithful sense. Nicely done. The wise become wiser Whiles fools never learn And become bigger fools Really liked those three lines.

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