Sunday, June 6, 2010

Quitting Smoking Comments

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I feel a little desperate
A smoke is what I seek
It's been three days
I'm starting to feel weak
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Ray Hansell
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Akhtar Jawad 13 June 2018

A nice topic to write a nice poem.

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Kim Barney 21 February 2015

You wrote this poem years ago. I hope that you have kicked the habit by now. Best of luck to you.

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Robin Machorro 06 June 2010

well i hope everything goes good for youu i really liked this poem

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Sandra J. 06 June 2010

Stay strong Ray, no one needs to die of lung cancer, or kill a loved one by second hand smoke, Lord knows how much pain this could cause you in the long run....Stay strong Ray, strength is what keeps everything solid and right with this world.

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