I feel a little desperate
A smoke is what I seek
It's been three days
I'm starting to feel weak
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You wrote this poem years ago. I hope that you have kicked the habit by now. Best of luck to you.
well i hope everything goes good for youu i really liked this poem
Stay strong Ray, no one needs to die of lung cancer, or kill a loved one by second hand smoke, Lord knows how much pain this could cause you in the long run....Stay strong Ray, strength is what keeps everything solid and right with this world.
A nice topic to write a nice poem.