Monday, December 19, 2022

Quite Comments

Rating: 4.6

Quit not my desire
Until the day falls silent
Incline not your ear
Tragic is the sound you made
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Rob Lamberton
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 August 2025

What a wonderful poem for spiritual enlightenment in a well crafted poetic form.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 February 2023

Simply beautiful the second time I read This Bravo! ! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2023

Beautiful poetic expressions . Great thoughts to ponder about. A well crafted poem.

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Holly Gardner 03 January 2023

Lovely

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Rob Lamberton 03 January 2023

Thank you! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 December 2022

Well penned. Top score

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 20 December 2022

Nice theme of the poem within acrostic tanka

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Rob Lamberton 20 December 2022

Like layered cake…or maybe an onion! Thanks for the compliment!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 December 2022

You mastered this style of poem Bravo! ! ! !

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David Wood 19 December 2022

A very good acrostic.5*

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