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Quit not my desire
Until the day falls silent
Incline not your ear
Tragic is the sound you made
Eternal is the new song

Rob Lamberton

Monday, December 19, 2022

Topic(s) of this poem: acrostic,forgiveness

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Acrostic Tanka (Consider: Collossians 1: 9)

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David Wood 19 December 2022

A very good acrostic.5*

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 December 2022

You mastered this style of poem Bravo! ! ! !

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 February 2023

Simply beautiful the second time I read This Bravo! ! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2023

Beautiful poetic expressions . Great thoughts to ponder about. A well crafted poem.

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Holly Gardner 03 January 2023

Lovely

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Rob Lamberton 03 January 2023

Thank you! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 December 2022

Well penned. Top score

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 20 December 2022

Nice theme of the poem within acrostic tanka

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Rob Lamberton 20 December 2022

Like layered cake…or maybe an onion! Thanks for the compliment!

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